Donny N’ Marie Ch 01

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College lovers get revenge on their nemesis


© 2015 by Salacious Scribe and Saxon Heart. All Rights Reserved. Posted with permission

Author’s note:

This story was written by two randomly paired authors as part of a contest on an erotic story site. They took the premise of the contest and their real names first names, and came up with this story.

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Marie Ormond was glad to be leaving for college. She was tired of all the gossip, and not having any friends. It was a small town populated by smaller minds.

Marie loved to write fiction, especially erotic fiction. She had hundreds of erotic stories on her tablet, which had been stolen five months ago. Whoever stole it had edited some of the racier stories so they appeared to be diary entries. One day she was a popular cheerleader, who all the boys wanted to date and all the girls envied. Then the faux diaries got posted all over social media sites. Now she was an outcast. No parent would let their daughter be friends with her, never mind dating; although that didn’t stop some of the boys from trying to get in her pants, it encouraged them to sexually harass her. The only support she got was from her brothers; Jimmy a Marine Lance Corporal on his second tour of duty in Afghanistan, and Wayne who was leaving for Marine Corps Recruit Depot Parris Island in a few days.

Marie finished packing and got into her car, to start the long drive to school. She was glad now that she had chosen a college on the other side of the country, and that she planned to drive there over the summer. Life at home was barely tolerable since her stories had been released. She might as well have been Hester Prynne the way the rest of the town treated her.

The summer flew by and Marie finally arrived at school. She did all the usual stuff to get settled in. When she walked into freshman orientation, she started to hear pointed whispers and laughter and felt people staring at her. She dismissed these feelings as paranoia from the way she had been treated at home. She sat down by herself and took out her phone to text her parents that she was safe and sound at school.

Without any warning, someone was grabbing her tits from behind. Marie jumped up and spun around to face her attacker. Her heart jumped up into her throat. It was Frank Kruchten, the guy she suspected of being the life-ruining thief. She fought back the tears knowing her time at college would be just as bad as it was back home. She knew Frank was a football star and this was a big football school. Marie fought back tears as she ran out of the meeting hall.

Marie ran into the bathroom and saw her roommate fixing her hair. “Marie, what’s the matter,” Dawn asked. Between sobs, Marie told Dawn the whole story and how her love of erotic fiction destroyed her life at home and now would destroy her college years. Dawn hugged the sobbing girl and rubbed her head letting her cry it out. “I know what assholes boys can be,” Dawn told her new friend as Marie’s sobs died out. “I slept with one guy after prom, and within a week the story had changed to me being gangbanged by the entire Basketball team.”

“Fucking assholes,” they said in unison.

“Jinx, you owe me a beer,” Dawn said as both girls dissolved into laughter.

They walked hand in hand back into the meeting hall just as Orientation began.


Donny Osborne sat up like a shot. “Oh fuck, I’m late!” He jumped up and grabbed the first items of clothing that didn’t smell like weed or booze and threw them on. He ran from the apartment cursing both his luck and his roommate. “That bastard should have woke me up,” he growled under his breath as he ran for the orientation. “First fucking day and I’m late.”

As he ran, Donny started to regret the fact that all he had done since junior high was write, skate, party and work on his car. Yeah, his Firebird would outrun almost any car he came against, but he had to stop running after only a block to catch his breath.

He made it into the meeting hall just in time to see some asshole jock playing grab ass, well more like grab tit with one of the hottest girls he had ever seen. She jumped up and fled the hall. As she ran past Donny heard someone say that she was Marie Ormond.

Marie Ormond, Donny thought. Super-slut in the flesh. He’d heard stories already about how many guys Marie had been with. “Dude her diary is all over the net. Go check it out,” his roommate Craig Zander had told him.

So that evening after seeing Marie in the flesh Donny logged on and found all of her diary entries. She’s done shit I have only dreamed of, he thought as he perused her most intimate thoughts. Donny had never actually been with a girl. He told a few guys he had been with several women, just to keep from being razzed about being a virgin.

He had read many stories online and had written a few of his own, using the experience gained through others’ tales. His characters were all pump and dump type guys; even though he despised guys who did that in real life. But it seemed to be cool to do that, so his characters did.

“I don’t know whether to be turned on or repulsed,” he said.

“What do you mean,” asked Craig.

“Shit dude. This chick has done shit porn stars haven’t done and makes it sound so hot, but I fear that any guy who braves her chasm would catch something incurable.”

Donny went to sleep that night thinking of Marie’s diary.


Marie woke up to sunlight streaming onto her face and looked at her clock. She stretched and yawned. After getting ready for the day, she went to her first class, creative writing. After telling the students about his policies and expectations for the course, he cleared his throat, “Now the final project is a big one so I always assign it on the first day of class. I will randomly assign each of you a partner and you are to collaborate on writing a piece of erotic fiction. I will grade this project on how well the story is integrated and how well you learned the material taught in this course. Now for the pairings…”

As the professor read off the names people looked around to find their partner. Marie noticed all the teams were boy-girl and that many of them were part of different cliques, the goth chick was teamed with a preppy, the pothead was with a young republican, and there was the jock being teamed with a band geek. What a bunch of odd couplings Marie thought to herself.

“…and finally Marie Ormond and Donny Osborne.” the professor said.

What did I do to deserve this? Donny thought to himself. Twenty-five girls in the class and he had to get paired with her. She’ll know right away I am not nearly as experienced as she is, he thought.

He looked around the room. For a moment he couldn’t find her. Maybe she isn’t here, he thought. It would be nice to avoid her for a day or two so I can figure out how to approach this.

Marie groaned inwardly. She had heard about Donny her first night on campus. One of the girls in Marie’s dorm told the new girls about the renowned Lothario, Donny Osborne. True to his rep he was sitting at his desk not even trying to meet up with her. Marie let out a frustrated sigh, got up walked over to the prick and simply said: “Student Union tomorrow, 9 am, and be prepared to work.” She spun on her heel and left the classroom.

“Bitch,” Donny said under his breath. He thought no one had heard him until the girl behind him stifled a giggle.


He was sitting in the student union drinking a coffee waiting for Marie to show up so they could discuss the outline. His mind went back to the night before. He had complained to Craig that he’d been stuck writing an erotic story with Marie.

“Well at least she’ll bring a wealth of experience to the deal,” Craig had quipped. “Just watch out that she doesn’t get all hot and bothered and jumps you before you can put on a couple of jimmy hats.”

“Jimmy hats? Nobody calls them Jimmy hats dude.”

“I do. Oh and if you need inspiration, looks at these,” Craig said producing several pictures of naked girls on his phone. “These are the cheerleader’s dude. You can use them to help you get descriptive.”

“More likely I’ll get my ass beat for having nude pics of some jock’s girl. How’d you get them anyway?”

“They’re going around. The guy who sent them to me works at the cell phone store. He pulled them off one of their phones when they got a new one. Relax, no one knows they exist.”

He thought of Craig’s pictures each time a cute coed passed by his table. He looked at his watch and thought, The tramp isn’t showing up. He was about to get up and leave when he spotted her coming towards him. Gorgeous girl, he thought as he stood to introduce himself. Too bad she has to be a slut.

Donny stood and extended his hand. “Hi, I’m…”

“Donny Osborne, yes I know,” she said reaching for his offered hand. “Shall we get to it?”

“Well, Professor Knob-gobbler said we have to give him a minimum of ten thousand words. All publishers’ grade and all realistic n shit. I think he’s nuts.”

“Professor what?” she asked.

“Professor Knoffler; rhymes with Knob-gobbler. You know a dick sucker. I think he’s a real asshole for doing things this way.” “What, making us write together? Making us write ten thousand words?”

“D. All the above. I think he just wants free fap material. Look, Marie, I may as well be honest with you. I am going to have to lean heavily on your experience here. I don’t have much of my own.”

“My writing experience? Didn’t you take writing in high school?”

“No, not writing experience. S…” he mumbled.

“I didn’t catch what you said Donny.

“Sex experience OK? I don’t have much and he expects reality. I…I..”

Marie flushed bright red all over. Her fight or flight response was all over the map; she wanted to run and hide, slap the asshole and cry all at the same time. She became a complete spazz and in trying to slap Donny she knocked his stuff to the floor. Marie took a deep breath and regained her composure.

“Look asshole, I will only tell you once. The rumors about me are not true. Those supposed diary entries of mine were stories I had written. Someone stole my tablet where I had saved them and edited the juicy bits to look like diary entries. As for my love life that is none of your fuckin’ business. Now can we do this and be mature, or do I need to castrate you so you can focus?”

As Marie finished speaking her anger was used up. She reached down to pick up Donny’s stuff. As she picked up his phone, she saw a naked picture of a girl she recognized from the pep squad. Her anger returned with a vengeance. “No experience huh?” she flared as she scrolled through picture after picture of naked girls.

“I heard about Ditch ’em Donny but was going to focus on the project, not the person. Maybe you should just write about your love ’em and leave ’em escapades. Probably be enough for a novel.”

Marie saw that Donny looked small and shrunken under her verbal barrage. She couldn’t help but notice how cute he looked, almost like he was embarrassed. Marie threw Donny’s phone at him and stood up to walk away. Donny reached out and took hold of her arm.

“Marie, wait, I think we got off on the wrong foot here.” Marie stopped in her tracks. “You got to explain how your reputation is undeserved, now it’s my turn.”

Marie sank sullenly back into her chair. “Well?”

“Do you know Kristy Demming?”

Marie nodded. Kristy was one of the richest and most beautiful girls at school. As a freshman, she was also one of the most well-known. Her father was a CEO of a biochem company.

“Well, Kristy and I dated briefly at the beginning of school.” Marie looked at him incredulously. “Seriously. She asked me out and everything. Well, the night before we were supposed to go out I snuck over to the Delta Pi Delta sorority. I figured I’d quiz a few of the girls as to how to impress Kristy. Well, I ran into a girl from my high school. She told me that I was part of a hazing ritual for Kristy.”

Marie had heard some of the horror stories about pledging sororities and had vowed to stay clear of them.

“Anyway; to get into the sorority she had to date a guy chosen by one of the seniors. She had to get take him on a series of dates, getting him more worked up with each one. Her goal was to send me home with blue balls for a week. Then at the big rush party, I was supposed to catch her fucking some football player. So after the first date, I told her I wanted to sow my wild oats and not just date one girl. She got all kinds of pissed off and stormed out. The next day I was trash to the few girls who had been talking to me.”

“Well if my reputation is based on lies, I guess yours can be too.” Marie conceded. “Now that we know each other’s story, I guess we can start to work on characters and plot.”

“Well well well. If it isn’t the school skank and her new boy toy.” Marie groaned as she heard Frank’s voice. “She is a nasty little slut. If you plan on hitting that diseased pussy of hers you better double bag it, otherwise God knows what incurable crotch rot you’ll catch.” Frank winks at Marie, “I will admit, she is a great lay, almost worth the risk” Frank says laughing at her.

“Frank the only time you even got close to being with me was when we were 5 and you gave me a dollar to play doctor with you,” Marie said unsuccessfully fighting back her tears. She finally broke down and began to sob out loud.

Donny stood up seeing how upset Marie was. “Dude, I think you owe Marie an apology.”

Frank looked at him in disbelief. “Damn! This slut got you wrapped around her finger, doesn’t she? Piece of advice friend, Marie here is a complete skank. It’s easier to get in her pants then it is to get…” Frank’s sentence went unfinished as Donny’s fist connected with Frank’s jaw.

As Frank fell, Donny heard someone yell “security”. Not wanting to add disciplinary problems to their reps, Donny grabbed his stuff, took Marie’s hand and ran out of the student union. Donny led Marie down a path and across the quad. Marie just followed; crying uncontrollably.

Donny finally found a secluded bench and had her sit down. He sat next to her as she cried holding her hand. Marie put her head on his shoulder and Donny wrapped a protective arm around her. They just sat there holding each other while Marie’s tears flowed.

Eventually, Marie was able to regain her composure. “D-D-Don-Donny” Marie stuttered “I want to thank you for staying with me while…” Marie trailed off unsure of what to say.

Donny feeling somewhat uncomfortable with the situation replied: “Who in the fuck was that crass piece of shit?”

Marie took a deep breath and swallowed her sobs determined not to let Frank make her cry again. “His name is Frank Kruchten. We went to school together and lived in a town of like fifteen people. He was the star of the football team. He asked me out one time and I agreed. I had to knee him in the balls so he wouldn’t rape me. With his dad being the police chief his uncle the county sheriff, guess who got away with date rape more than once. I also suspect that he’s the one who stole my tablet and posted my stories.”

“What a fucking scumbag,” Donny said. “I am so sorry you had to deal with him.”

Marie impulsively kissed Donny. As their lips met Marie couldn’t explain why she kissed him.

Once the kiss ended, Marie and Donny stared into each other eyes. Marie waited for Donny to speak.

“That was worth it.” He said.

Puzzled; Marie asked, “What was worth what?”

“That kiss was worth every beating I’ll take from the football team for hitting their golden boy.”

Marie stared at him for a moment and realized he wasn’t kidding. She’d never had anyone stand up for her. “I’m glad you liked it.”

Two stoners walked past their bench. As they did Donny leaned in and kissed Marie again. The stoners looked but said nothing. When they were past Donny broke the kiss.

“Aren’t you worried about what people are going to say when they hear about you kissing me,” she asked.

“Nope. I liked it.” Donny sat there with a funny look on his face. Marie couldn’t decipher the look.

“What’s wrong Donny?”

“I’m having a problem that I don’t know how to deal with. I don’t have a lot of expertise and I can’t figure out how to go about doing it.”

“Doing what?”

“Well, there’s this girl I think I like and I wanted to ask her out. I don’t know how to without looking like an idiot.”

Marie felt disappointment wash over her, but she was determined not to let Donny see. “Maybe he is the pump and dump type, after all, she thought. “I would suggest that you just ask her out. Maybe to a pizza place or something.”

He paused for a moment like a switch had been thrown in his head. “Marie, would you like to go have pizza with me this evening?”

Marie felt like a deer caught in headlights. She was shocked when Donny asked her out. It was the first time in over 3 years that a boy had asked Marie out well at least out in public. There had been plenty of invites to the local lover’s lane.

“Umm well, I guess… I mean, after all, you did knock Frank on his ass for me. So yes, yes we can eat pizza together tonight. It’s a date.”

Donny and Marie parted ways, after agreeing to meet at Marie’s dorm at 7 pm.


Donny was sitting at his desk when Craig walked into the room. “What up dude?”

Craig looked at him, “Are you fucking retarded?”

“What?” Donny asked. “Why the fuck are you asking me that?”

“Because on a total fucking retard would punch out the future quarterback for the biggest slut on six continents.”

“Dude, she ain’t a slut.”

“The fuck she ain’t.”

“Do you know the difference between a whore and a slut?”


“It’s simple. A whore will fuck everybody. A slut will fuck everybody but you. Have you fucked her?”

“No. Why the fuck would I?”

“I haven’t fucked her either, so see? She cannot be a slut because she hasn’t fucked everybody but you.”

“Motherfucker, don’t use semantics on me. If it walks like a slut, talks like a slut and smells like a slut…well enough said.”

“Let me ask you this. Didn’t you go to school with her?”

Craig scratched his head trying to figure out where Donny was going with his line of questioning. “Yeah, I went to school with her.”

“How many guys do you know personally that fucked her?”

“I know one who claimed to, but he also had a girlfriend in New York that he never went to see or never came to see him.”

“So he was a fucking proven liar,” Donny paused. “Just nod your head, we all know guys like that. Do you know anyone here who has fucked her?”

“No. I…”

“Ex-fuckin-zactly!! You can’t give one name of any guy who has fucked the biggest whore east, west, north and south of the Pecos and you went to school with her?”

Craig sat there as Donny recounted Marie’s story about the stolen tablet. He told him of the entire encounter with Frank Kruchten. Finally, Craig said, “I believe Frank would do something like that. He always had a knack for being a complete cock.”

“I think he has a Ph.D. in cock.”

“So are you gonna start dating this chick? Of course, that is if she’ll date a genetic misfortunate chud.”

“What can I say? I attract the hotties.” Craig only scoffed.


Marie went back to her room and began to look at her clothes to figure out what to wear. “Something casual, but sexy.”

She wanted Donny to like her, and she knew she liked him, but she didn’t want everyone to think he was only with her because she was a slut.

Marie settled on a short green skirt, and white off the shoulder blouse, and a pair of fancy flip flops. She decided to wear her hair up exposing her long neck. To top the outfit off she added a heavy beaded necklace her grandmother left her that hung down between her breasts. She laid out her clothes and went to take a shower, wearing nothing but a towel.

After washing her body thoroughly, she went to wrap her

towel around herself, and it was nowhere to be found. “Hello” she called out hoping someone had picked it up by mistake. No one answered her. She peeked into the hall and no one was around.

She waited hoping someone would come in who could go get a towel from her unlocked room. After almost an hour, no one came in. She had checked the hall several times and no one was in it. Finally deciding to risk it she left the safety of the shower room and started walking to her room.

As soon as the door closed, a bunch of guys filled the hall and were pushing against Marie. She felt hands grabbing her ass and tits, and a finger even slid into her pussy. She tried to run but the crowd was too thick.

When she finally made it through the gauntlet and reached her door, her heart dropped. Frank was standing there, holding her towel. “Well well well, lookie here. A naked slut without her boy toy to protect her. Did you think that I would let you get away with having that loser boyfriend of yours sucker punch me? No way chickie. There will be a lot more payback. Just wait until…”

“What the fuck is going on here? Everyone clear the hall now or I will take action.” came the voice of the RA.

The guys harassing Marie quickly left. The RA walked over to Marie and Frank. “Is this guy bothering you Marie?” asked the RA looking at them.

“No, sir!” Frank answered. “Marie here dropped her towel and I was picking it up when one of those assholes yelled naked girl and they all came running. Right, Marie?”

Marie just shook her head not believing she was still naked. Frank put the towel on Marie’s head “I’ll get you Marie, and your little boy too” he called out as he walked down the hall.

Marie went into her room and lay down on her bed and just started to cry. She wished Dawn was going to come back but she was on an overnight trip with the band. Marie eventually fell asleep, drained from her tears.


Donny and Marie had begun spending a lot of time together, doing everything that typical college freshman did, well everything but that. And football games; they both hated the school’s football team and secretly rooted for whoever was playing their school. Somehow Frank had started dating Kristy Demming, to no one’s surprise.

Donny and Marie used football games to work on their Creative Writing paper, this way they still had time for a social life. They had been asked to star in a video for Dare Dorm, and they declined. Party invitations came from the wildest frats and sororities. One frat even invited them to an orgy, they left when everyone was drunk and started to shove hard things in wet things. Surprisingly, they both still had their reps as the slut and the one night wonder. It seemed they were the only two people on campus that had not fucked.

Frank was being his usual detestable self. While Donny and Marie were making friends among their classmates, Frank was alienating everyone on campus.

One night when the football team was playing their school’s biggest rival, Donny and Marie were in her dorm room, working on the first sex scene in their paper. Their main characters were both fairly inexperienced lovers, but both were very athletic, and flexible. “No no no. There is no way Roman could do that to Julia,” Donny said in frustration as he read over Marie’s shoulder while she typed. “It’s impossible, even for someone who is a contortionist to do that.”

“Look, Donny, I’ve done a lot of research on the human body. This isn’t that hard to do. I bet you could even do it.”

“Prove it,” he said smugly, confident that the human body could not bend like that. “If I’m right you take that out, and write something more realistic.”

“And when I prove you wrong, what do I get?” Marie asks smiling.

Donny looks at her, thinking. “What do you want?”

“A favor to be named later.”

“Agreed,” Donny said with a smile. “So how are you gonna prove it”

Marie stood up from her desk chair and stretched, pulling her shirt up exposing her naval in the process. Donny looked at her flat tight belly and long lithe legs extending out from her short skirt as she worked out the kinks from working hunched over a computer for the last two hours.

Marie smiled; watching Donny admire her lean taut teen body, and stretched for a bit longer to let him get a good look. Wordlessly she walked over to the bed and lay down on it matching Julia’s position.

Donny watched her and then realized what she was doing so he climbed on the bed into Roman’s position, and they held that position. “No Donny. If you just swing your left leg and move your right arm a bit then…” Donny maneuvered his body around as described in their story. Donny successfully ended up in the position he had maintained was unrealistic.

Neither of them realized that their faces would be inches apart. Their eyes met, they froze for a second. Swiftly their lips found each other, their tongues penetrated mouths, and hands furiously tore at clothes. Donny pushed Marie’s shirt up; exposing her firm young breasts, with small pink aureole and long nipples. His hand found her right nipple and pinched it. Marie gasped in pleasure and kissed him even harder.

Marie had pulled Donny’s shirt off, so it was hanging around his neck and raked her long manicured fingernails over his chest leaving long scratch marks on his chest. Donny’s other hand slid down Marie’s body and up under her skirt. He found her panties and pushed them aside slipping a finger into Marie’s pussy.

Marie gasped in pleasure and broke the kiss, thrusting her hips at Donny’s hand to get him in deeper. Donny took the opportunity to suck her left nipple into his mouth and bit it as he continued to tug and pinch her right one.

Marie’s hands found Donny’s shorts and pushed them down his legs freeing his engorged cock. Donny added a second finger to Marie’s pussy and she cried out “Oh God Donny, fuck me! Fuck me now! Shove that cock in me and fuck me ’til you cum!”

Her hand found his cock and insistently pulled it towards her waiting hole. Donny slid his fingers out of her pussy and sucked them into his mouth. “Oh god baby, you taste better than anything ever. I’ve gotta eat you later.” Marie smiled as she placed the head of his manhood at her entrance.

They both paused looking at each other in the eyes savoring this moment. Marie nodded her head yes to let Donny know she was ready for him. Donny slowly entered her love tunnel until he met resistance. Marie was panting as she waited for Donny to make her a full woman.

Donny leaned down and kissed Marie and pushed his tongue into her mouth. As they were kissing he shifted his hips forward and felt a slight pop, and Marie gasped as Donny finally broke the last barrier to her womanhood.

Donny sank his cock into Marie while kissing her. Once their navels met, Donny tried to pull his back from Marie so he could look at her face. Marie refused to break the kiss and kept her face plastered to his until he went higher than she could get.

Their heads separated, and Marie was breathing heavily looking at Donny, resting on her elbows, passion burning in her eyes. Donny watched her face as he began to slowly slide out of her. Marie sharply inhaled as she felt the movement.

Donny paused when only his head was left inside her, and Marie threw her legs around him and tried to pull him back in. Donny smiled and forcefully rammed his entire length into her.

“Fuck yes! Hard and fast Donny! Fuck me hard and fast!” Marie cried out. Donny nodded and began to jackhammer her no longer virginal pussy as Marie raked his back with her fingernails, drawing a bit of blood. Donny kissed her with animal passion and Maries began thrusting her hips into Donny.

They were no longer humans; they had become rutting animals, driving each other closer and closer to the pinnacle of the experience. Their bodies were covered in sweat, and Donny began alternating between kissing Marie and sucking her engorged nipples into his mouth and biting them. Every time he bit her nipple, Marie cried out in pleasure.

Marie wanted to see how it felt if she was on top, so she tried to roll them over forgetting the size of the dorm bed.

They landed on the floor with a grunt, Marie on top of Donny who was still buried in her pussy. Marie put her feet on the floor and began using Donny as a trampoline. As she bounced on his cock, sweat flew from her body like a garden sprinkler.

Donny reached his hands up and grabbed both nipples with his thumb and forefinger and tried to pull them into his mouth on the floor. He noticed a mole under her right breast, as he tugged on her tits.

Marie stopped riding his cock and screamed “FUCK YES I’M CUMMING” as her body started to trash around uncontrollably. Even the muscles in her pussy went into spasm and Donny who had been close couldn’t hold back anymore, and grunted and began blasting his cum into Marie’s well-fucked pussy.

When her orgasm subsided, she collapsed on top of Donny and laid her head on his chest listening to his racing heartbeat. She loved feeling him continue to ooze cum into her as his penis grew soft inside her.

Donny lay on the floor, caressing Marie’s hair, wondering why they had waited so long to do this. Donny had never been happier in his life. He heard Marie mumble something, and froze. “Wha…wha…what did you say?” He asked hoping his ears deceived him.

She picked up her head and looked him in the eye. “I said, ‘I Love you,'” and kissed him with more passion than he believed possible. Donny put his hand on the back of her head to keep the kiss going while his mind raced to figure out how to reply.

“Sure I care about her, I miss her when we’re not together, and I always look forward to seeing her. I sometimes just call or text her to hear her voice, or just to know she’s still there. But we’ve only just met. This is crazy, do I love you…MAYBE”,

he realized as the kiss broke.

He was about to say something, unsure of exactly what when the door to the room was thrown open and Dawn walked saying “You guys missed a hell of a…”She froze at the sight before her.

Donny was lying on the floor, with Marie on top; both covered in sweat. His cock chose that moment to fall out of Marie’s pussy with an audible plop. Her underwear pushed to the side couldn’t hide the cum that started dripping out of her pussy. Her skirt around her waist and her tee-shirt pushed over her head exposing her red swollen tits covered in bit marks. Donny being on the bottom was somewhat less exposed, but his shorts were hanging off his left ankle, his chest crisscrossed with scratches.

All three froze in horror. This can’t get any worse Marie thought. She was wrong.

“Hey Dawn” a voice called from the hallway “Are the lovebirds cumming or what?” A group of students walked in the open door and froze seeing the couple in such a compromising position.

“I think they already came,” a voice said. Everyone started talking at once, a few people in front pulled out cell phones and started taking pictures and one guy started taking a video. The flashes removed the stupor that froze Donny, Marie, and Dawn.

Dawn jumped in front of the crowd trying to protect her friend’s modesty, Donny reached to the bed and dragged a sheet over them and Marie… Well, she just screamed. Loudly.

The RA who was studying for a test was sitting in her room. When she heard THE SCREAM she came running. Seeing the flashes from the cameras, and looking in the room, she guessed what had happened and started grabbing phones from people. Several people complained and she helped Dawn push the rest of the group out of the room, and dropped the phones on Marie’s bed she stepped into the hall and Dawn slammed the door shut, locking it.

“SHUT UP!” she yelled over the noise from the throng. “Anyone caught with pictures of that…” pointing over her shoulder, “and no release will have a very uncomfortable conversation with campus police. Got it? If I took your phone, once I delete anything from tonight, you’ll get it back. Now get the fuck back to what you were doing before you became perverts.”

She glared at the crowd who began to break up. Once the hall was mostly empty, she turned around and knocked on the door. “It’s Linda, the RA. Please let me in.” She heard the door unlock, and it opened. Dawn was crying, Donny was dressed holding Marie who was still wrapped in a sheet.

Linda closed the door and locked it. She smiled at them. Next time lock the door and put a sock on the knob. People will know, but they won’t have the opportunity to watch or take pictures.” She smiled warmly at the couple. “I warned them that if anyone is caught with pics of you two they would be turned over to campus police. Besides, I think I grabbed most of the phones.”

She picked up the phones and as she was leaving she said, “If anyone gives you grief let me know. I’ve got shit on just about everyone on campus.” Linda left closing the door behind her.

Dawn walked over to Marie. “I’m so sorry, I had no idea and I was so happy for you two, I just froze. I…I…I…” her voice trailed off not knowing what to say.

Donny was being stoic just holding the sobbing girl. Marie looked over at Dawn. “I know it’s not your fault, you couldn’t have known.” She pulled an arm free and offered a hug to Dawn. Donny just stood there holding the two crying girls, hoping that Frank wouldn’t hear about this.

The next night Donny took Marie out to dinner. He had gone out and bought a three-piece suit. Marie was dressed to the nines. Donny was too nervous to pay attention; he only knew she looked good enough to eat. Donny was nervous because he was going to finally respond to Marie.

They ate their appetizers in silence, Marie worried about Donny and how he hadn’t said anything about her declaration of love for him. Donny was not sure if he had the right words for her.

After their appetizers, the manager came over to them. “I sincerely apologize, the kitchen staff made a mistake and your food will be slightly delayed. I can offer you a 20% discount and a complimentary dessert for the inconvenience.”

Donny looked at Marie and said, “Just means I get to stare at that beautiful face that much longer.”

Marie smiled and the manager chimed in “Ahh yes if beauty were food she would be a most satisfying meal.” Donny laughed and Marie blushed as the manager gave a half bow and walked away.

“Speaking of eating…” Donny said with an evil grin lighting up his face. “Since we have time, and I didn’t get a chance last night.”

Marie looked at him in horror. “You can’t be serious,” she said, “We’re in public.”

“The bathrooms aren’t public,” he replied

“The bathrooms?! How romantic…and sexy?” She shook her head.

Donny took her hand. “Marie you told me something last night that meant a lot to me: but we were interrupted before I could reply.” Marie met his eyes and her brow furrowed in worry. “We have been together now, for almost three months, and made love just once. Yet I feel closer to you than anyone I’ve ever known. I sometimes call your phone when you’re in class, just to hear your voice.”

Marie’s eyes filled with tears as Donny continued, “If I go more than twelve hours without seeing you, I start to feel depressed, and can’t sleep. I want…no I NEED you in my life.” He gets on one knee and reaches into his pocket. Marie’s eyes went wide as he fumbled around for a bit and pulled out a jewelry box. He puts it on the table in front of her. “Marie more than anything I want us to be together.” He opens the box and says “Will you wear this promise ring until I can afford the ring you truly deserve?”

Tears rolled from Marie’s eyes as she slipped the ring on, and took Donny’s hand. She held it to her breast and said, “Which way is the bathroom?”

Donny stood up and led Marie to the long corridor leading to both the kitchen and restrooms. They passed their server and Donny told her, “I need to help my girlfriend with something; we aren’t leaving so hold our table.” The server smiled knowingly and nodded. Marie’s face turned as red as the boiled lobsters being served.

Donny took her into the single-occupant restroom and locked the door. He took Marie into his arms and kissed her. As they kissed he picked her up and put her on the counter. He took her foot in his hand and kissed each toe, inhaling her aroma. He continued kissing up her shapely leg, massaging her leg as he slowly, teasingly worked his way up. When he reached her knee he paused and held her leg out straight lightly tickling the back of her knee.

Marie sighed as he began working his way up her thigh. He kept kissing licking and biting her thighs as he slowly slid the hem of her dress up her silky legs. Once her panties came into view, he began to bite and suck harder, marking her firm thighs with his mouth.

He pushed her panties aside and deeply inhaled smelling her arousal. Marie was so turned on she grabbed his head and tried to force it to her wet cunt. Donny looked up and shook his head no. His hands slid along her legs up to her hips and found the waistband of her panties.

Marie lifted her ass from the counter and let him slide her panties off. Not wanting to waste time, he put them into his breast pocket as he leaned in until his nose was fractions of a millimeter from her sex. He extended his tongue and touched her labia.

Marie’s whole body shuddered at this contact. Donny moved his face up and down running his tongue over the outer lips of her pussy. Marie gasped and Donny finally penetrated her lips with his tongue. The scent, the flavor, the danger all combined to make Donny wild with lust.

He drove his tongue deep into Marie and began exploring her intimate folds and savoring her taste. Marie was so turned on by the naughty nature of the situation she was on the verge of orgasm before Donny reached her moist folds.

She was fighting; holding it back trying to prolong the pleasure, as Donny started slurping up her nectar. Marie gasped “I’m about to cum” and Donny’s mouth was flooded with her cream. Donny swallowed every drop he could and licked the remnants off her thighs and lips.

They both wanted more but were afraid of pushing their luck. Donny stood up and kissed Marie sharing her cum with her. Marie licked his face clean and jumped off the counter. They washed up and straightened up their clothes. As nonchalantly as possible, they walked out of the restroom and headed back to their table. Donny was studying the way Marie’s ass shifted as she walked.

He was stopped in his tracks by their server. “You’re just in time. I was about to bring out your food, but we gotta fix this first,” she said pointing at Donny’s breast. Donny looked down and saw Marie’s panties in his pocket. “The color kinda matches your tie,” she told him, “But that yellow flower and leg elastic should be hidden unless you want everyone to know they’re panties.” Donny adjusted the panties to look like a pocket square and joined Marie at the table.

Once they left the restaurant, Donny was driving back to their dorms and Marie put her head in his lap. Donny jumped when she unzipped him and fished out his still erect cock. She impishly smiled at him “Don’t crash” she said and then took him into her mouth. She worked her lips and tongue all over his shaft as he continued to drive.

Marie was an excellent cock sucker. She would bring him almost to the point of no return and back off until the urgency was gone, then begin again. Donny pulled up in front of Marie’s building and stopped the car. Marie felt the car stop and slide her hand into his open fly and grabbed and twisted his balls as she took his entire shaft down her throat. The buildup was too much. He blasted jet after jet of cum down her throat as fellow students walked by oblivious to their fling.


Christmas break was fast approaching and life had almost returned to normal. Donny and Marie were still going strong, Dawn had started dating a guy Marie found to be crass and uncultured, but Dawn seemed happy, so who was she to judge.

Since their first encounter, none of the pics or videos had surfaced, and they were much more careful. Every Saturday they rented a motel room, and from the time they checked in and they fucked until they were sore.

One week they just sixty-nined until their jaws hurt, Donny had cum seven times and Marie had swallowed every drop. That was the day Donny had found Marie’s G spot. Marie lost count of how often Donny made her cum. She was sore for a week and a half after that, but she loved every twinge of pain because it reminded her of her lover.

Another time after writing a scene where Roman and Julia had anal sex, Donny and Marie decided to recreate that scene.

They always got the same room at the no-tell motel in the sleazy part of town. As soon as they opened the door, and saw the familiar beat-up furniture, and green shag carpet matted down from years of God knows what, they smiled.

Before the door even closed, they were stripping each other’s clothes off and biting, scratching, pinching and tugging. One thing they had learned is both liked their sex rough. Their sex kit included Band-Aids and antibiotic ointment.

Once they were both naked Marie dropped to her knees and took Donny’s cock into her mouth. Donny put some clothespins on her nipples, and Marie moaned around his cock. Donny who had been working out since he decided to join the swim team, next year, was easily able to pick Marie up from the floor. He rotated her body using his cock as the pivot point so she kept sucking him. Once he held her upside down, he placed her legs around his head and began to lick her pussy.

Marie loved it when he did this, she felt so safe and secure in his arms and the way he could pick her up and toss her around like a ragdoll was a never-ending source of pride in him, and quite a turn on as well.

She continued sucking his cock as Donny sucked her clit into his mouth. He began chewing on the nub as he carried her over to the bed. He sat on the bed and kept Marie in a vertical position. All too soon he was spurting his cum into her throat.

I have to find a way to last longer, he thought to himself. She’s way too good a cock sucker.

Marie sucked Donny’s balls into her mouth and sucked and bit on them as Donny continued to orally assault her pussy. When his oral actions had finally made Marie cum, Donny laid back on the bed. Marie let his balls pop out of her mouth. Donny was already growing hard so Marie grabbed the duffel bag with the toys and items they enjoyed using during sex.

The clothespins on her nipples were sending shockwaves of pleasure all over her body with each step. She put the bag on the nightstand and took out a Bullet vibe and a container of Pjur’s Back Door Lube. Donny smiles as he watches the naked girl root around in the bag. She pulls out an extremely tiny dog collar.

“What the hell is that?” Donny asked. Marie handed the small piece of leather to him, and he looked at it.

“Last week you complained that you came to fast. Since neither of us like rubbers, this is my solution. It’s a cock ring. Once you’re hard, I put it on the base of your shaft, and tighten it up. It’s supposed to delay your orgasm. It had good user reviews so I got it for you, especially for today.”

Donny kisses her and says “You had me at tighten.” She smiles and he grabs and twists one of the clothespins making Marie squeal in delight. Marie Sucked on Donny for a few minutes to make sure he was ready then affixed the cock ring on him. Donny groaned in pleasure as it went past snug and started to encroach on painful.

Once it was fastened in place, Marie applied the lube to Donny’s shaft working it all over his shaft. Once he was nice and slick, she got on all fours on the bed and Donny kissed her sweet little butthole. He then applied lube to the exterior of her opening. Donny scooped up some and forced his finger into her ass, coating the insiders with lube as well.

Once they were nice and slippery, Donny took the bullet and turned it on putting it in Marie’s pussy. She gasped as the vibrations went right to her core. Donny knelt behind her and aimed his arrow at her bull’s-eye. The head was touching the ring of muscle guarding the last virgin hole Marie had.

“Now Donny! Fuck my ass! Fuck it hard!”

Donny felt her ass stretch around his cock head as it slid in. He steadily pushed his cock in not wanting to stop. The feeling of her ultra-tight ass and vibrations from the toy in her pussy made Donny’s head spin.

Marie couldn’t wait so she lurched back, filling her bowels with Donny’s cock. She began sliding along the shaft. Donny knowing she liked dirty talk started to say “ride my ass you little slut. Fuck my dick, you dirty whore. Take my cum in your ass. I bet you’ll lick me clean once I blast my baby batter into your shit hole”

Marie groaned; loving hearing those words from the man she loved. Donny began spanking her ass as she pumped his cock with her hips. Marie reached back and scraped Donny’s balls with her fingers making him groan.

They continued fucking for almost an hour. Marie had several orgasms while Donny was beginning to think his balls would explode from the pressure building in his cock. Donny felt Marie was about to cum again and as her orgasm started he reached under her with both hands and removed the clothespins. Marie screamed in pain and delight as blood flooded her bruised nipples, and another orgasm rocked her world. The orgasmic throes beneath him finally pushed him over the edge, and he felt his cock burst like a poorly built dyke after a hurricane.

The intensity of his orgasm made him think his dick had split in two. Cum started to squirt out of Marie’s ass as Donny continued to thrust into her. The cum ran down Marie’s body like a river as Donny continued to blast more into her. Donny finally finished cumming, and Marie squeezed her vaginal muscles shooting the vibe out of her pussy and into Donny’s chest. He then put it in his mouth and sucked it clean.

They collapsed onto each other, their limbs intertwined, and rested from one of the most intense bouts of fucking they ever shared.

All too soon it was time for Christmas Break.


Donny looked around Marie’s room like he was seeing it for the last time. “Four weeks. Damn, I can’t believe I am going to go four whole weeks without seeing you, babe.”

Marie looked at him and realized that he was not lying when he told her that he loved her. She’d had her doubts, but the pain that showed on his face let her know his true feelings for her.

“I know,” she said with a tear in her eye. “Look at the bright side. It’s Christmas time and we will have our families. Besides, we can Video Chat and call each other every day.”

“I’ll like Video Chat much better when you can hug through it.” He glanced at the clock, feeling the lump in his throat. I can’t let her see me cry. I can’t! She’ll have a miserable time at home if she knows how bad I’m hurting, he thought. Then trying to sound jovial he said, “I guess we can have phone sex.”

She forced a smile. “You’re bad. I ‘m beginning to think you have a one-track mind,” she quipped.

She forced a smile. Not having his cock for a month would be hard, but not as hard as he’s going to be Marie thought. “Maybe we can have Video Chat sex” She offered, imagining his face as she fucked a dildo, and he used the Fleshlight she bought him as a gag gift for Christmas.

“I guess that’ll have to do until I can get you in bed again” He replied wondering how she would react to the double dildo he got her as a gag gift. I wonder if she’d use that while we Video Chat.

“And promise me that you won’t open your gift until we can Video Chat on Christmas,” Marie said smiling picturing his reaction.

“Same goes for you young lady, or I’ll have to put you over my knee and spank your naked ass.”

“That better be a promise, not a threat,” Marie said smiling at her lover.

He gave Marie a kiss that made her melt. She had hoped against hope that he’d be able to travel home with her, but with both of them being freshman it just wasn’t meant to be. Donny’s mother had threatened to filet him alive if he made her spend Christmas alone.

As soon as Donny closed the front door, Marie let the tears flow. She knew they’d be together again when the break was over, but it seemed so far away. Donny managed to hold his tears until he was back in his room.

Craig had flown home that morning so Donny had the place to himself. He wouldn’t fly out until the next morning. He planned to spend the evening working on his portion of the story. He had to write a breakup scene for their couple. The only reason for breaking them up was to make them have awesome make up sex.

He tried writing, but every time he started, he caught himself thinking of Marie. She’s 1000 miles away by now, he thought. He got three paragraphs written before a couple of guys he knew came by to tell him about a big last night of school bash being held at one of the fraternities. Donny barely made it to the airport on time to catch his flight home.



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